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Joyce osas – “Depression”

My life, a quicksand
The more I struggled, the more I sank
Tiny strand of hope losing its strength
Every single day,
Stepping out with a facade
But in between those closed doors
Is a lost soul yearning for tranquillity
Wanting to be free from this bondage

Those internal horrors never parted ways with me
Inner voices kept torturing my soul
If I don’t reply “I’m fine”
How do I explain the battles of my ferocious demons within?
Or that it has eaten deep right to my heart?
When my wails of rescue are silent
And my screams for freedom
are internal with empty words
No, I rather not
Let me wallow in my anguish
More like walking in the shadow of death

However, this dreadful soul deserves a last chance
So Tonight
Determined to escape this grey space
I’m on the quest for peace
Uncertain of the means or location
But maybe my shouts will get out this time
“Oh, Save me!”
“Please, Save me!!”

 

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23 Comments

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Jhaybhoyereply
May 20, 2020 at 1:39 pm

Oh save me! Please save me!
Wow😮
A great piece dear, keep this moving!
I love it for real

Tolureply
May 20, 2020 at 1:48 pm

This is amazing, there are so many people that battle with depression, its not an easy thing 😪, everyone deserves peace and happiness. I loved it 😊 you’re an amazing poet

Danielreply
May 20, 2020 at 1:58 pm

Brilliant

The_Odistreply
May 20, 2020 at 2:05 pm

It’s amazing how you’ve captured the loss of tranquility faced by many. Kudos!

Mimireply
May 20, 2020 at 2:21 pm

Wow
Such a great piece hunnie 🥰I’m proud of u dear

Paul I.Areply
May 20, 2020 at 2:28 pm

Nice!

His Royal OG’reply
May 20, 2020 at 2:57 pm

December 10 2019

Oluwatoyinreply
May 20, 2020 at 3:14 pm

Wow wow, this is a beautiful piece….
“Uncertain of the means or location, but maybe my shouts will get out this time”… Welldone babe👏👏👏

Gina Odafereply
May 20, 2020 at 3:26 pm

Nice one dear 👌

BigBootyPumpkinreply
May 20, 2020 at 3:30 pm

Relatable piece. Beautiful writing too.

Seunreply
May 20, 2020 at 3:31 pm

A beautiful piece

~Hendrickreply
May 20, 2020 at 4:39 pm

Good piece

Gloryreply
May 20, 2020 at 5:08 pm

Wonderful.. Piece a master piece as usual I want to write like this tooo💕💕
Well-done Baby …

Ugonnareply
May 20, 2020 at 5:58 pm

Nice write up,
….u just spoke our mind!

OBI HILDAreply
May 20, 2020 at 6:04 pm

AWESOME ❤️

Chisomreply
May 20, 2020 at 6:39 pm

Wonderful piece
Don’t die within.
Everyone deserves a chance at happiness

Abbyvisualsreply
May 20, 2020 at 6:45 pm

Lovely❤️

Ayomidereply
May 20, 2020 at 6:48 pm

Nice poem,it really depicts what a lot of people are going through.

Oluwatobi Ogunwuyi(Grandpa)reply
May 20, 2020 at 7:05 pm

This really good, it hit deep. Am Glad I came across this piece today.

Udeh Henry Ebubereply
May 20, 2020 at 7:24 pm

Yo Joyce, this is a nice piece. Keep writing. Kudos

what_a_commentreply
May 21, 2020 at 2:28 am

omo mehnn, me big sad now oo😩

adminreply
May 21, 2020 at 8:32 am
– In reply to: what_a_comment

Please reach out to the numbers in the “Get Help” section if you need someone to talk to

Joyce Osasreply
May 21, 2020 at 10:26 am

Thanks y’all. I’m really glad we all enjoyed the piece!
A quite number of people are dealing with depression and anxiety today, everyone deserves to be happy… please let’s help each other to fight this.🙏🙏

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